The title "Alcoholics Anonymous" had appeared very early in the discussion, probably in October, 1938. We do not know who first used these words.
That is questionable. As we discovered recently it appeared more than half year earlier around March 1938. How do we know that? We read ALCOHOLICS ANONYMOUS COMES OF AGE, page 159.
Each morning I traveled all the way from Brooklyn to Newark where, pacing up and down in Henry's office, I began to dictate rough drafts of the chapters of the coming book. As we seemed unable to come up with any genuine outline for the publication, I worked from a hastily drawn-up list of possible chapter headings. Week after week, Henry raced around among the stock subscribers, prodding them for their installments."
One of us questioned the phrase "a hastily drawn-up list of possible chapter headings". What was that? Some overdue research revealed the answer. In fact said a hastily drawn-up list of possible chapter headings was a complete outline for our book Alcoholics Anonymous, created and written by Hank Parkhurst around March 1938.
download document hank38.pdfChapter 1 - Being dictated -
Preface of the Book -
History of this work -
Questions & answers -
Why the Book -
What is needed -
The Program -
List of Chapters -
The aim of the book -
What is an alcoholic -
The medical chapter -
The Sales Promotion Possibilities -
In the book should be suggestions regarding
hospitalization
Dr. silkworths [sic] letters.
[Bill Wilson's handwriting] Hanks ideas
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Why the Book
It has been estimated by the Rockefeller
Foundation that there are over a
million incurable, from medical or
psychiatrical standpoints, alcoholics
in the United States.
These men realize their vital
need and are desperately seeking
the answer. The book should be so
written that it will prove the
answer to these people.
The work has become so broad
that full time assistance and
direction is needed. This costs
money (which has been offered
by foundational funds) however the
alcoholics believe it should
come from within their own
experience.
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Questions & Answers -
1. The question is often asked - where does the money
come from for this work?
2. How do I know this will work with me?
Why is this method better than any other religious
method? (It is not - this is only a step toward a
religious experience which should be carried forward
in christian fellowship no matter what your church)
3. Will I fail if I cannot keep my conduct
up to these highest standards?
4 - What happens when an alcoholic has a sexual
relapse?
5. There is so much talk about a religious experience
- what is it?
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Sales Promotion Possibilities
The Market -
1. Over million alcoholics (Rockefeller Foundation)
2. At least million non alcoholics
that have definite alcoholic
relatives
3. Every employer of 100 or
more people
4. Those that take an
academic interest. [a]
5. Two hundred & ten thousand ministers [b]
6. One hundred sixty nine thousand
physicians.
7. The total would be well
over three million prospects [c]
[a] this entry was first written as number 6,
but the 6 was written over by a 4 and the
entry was promoted with an arrow
[b] First written as "Half million ministers"
[c] The word "three" was written over "a"
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Suggestion for Chapter 1 -
A History of the work -
Possibly this could be carried on
the first two pages of the book.
This history should establish
proof of success of the work
and carry hope to everyone
that reads that much.
The opening to the book
should arouse the emotion
of hope.
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Mail order
A form letter of acknowledgment
must be worked out.
This will acknowledge the receipt
of the enquiry [sic] and will inform
that the writer can secure the
book by mailing two dollars [d]
or through their local bookseller
who can secure from
Alcoholics Anonymous, Inc.
Post Box xxxx
The profits of the book are administered
by a foundation for promotion of
cure and understanding of alcoholism.
[d] first written as "mailing a buck for"
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Title Page
Alcoholics Anonymous
Published by
ALCOHOLICS ANONYMOUS, INC
A NON PROFIT organization
for the promotion of
cure and understanding
of alcoholism.
Profits accruing from sale
of this book will be [e] administered
by a foundation for promotion
of cure and understanding
of alcoholism. Members of
this foundation.........
Post Box...
xxxxxxxxx xx
[e] first written as "are" and changed
to "will be"
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Observations -
One of the easiest and most talked of
things among us is a religious experience.
I believe that this is incomprehensible to
most people. Simple & meaning words
to us - but meaningless to most of
the people that we are trying to get
this over too. - In my mind religious
experience - religion - etc - should
not be brought in. We are actually
irreligious - but we are trying to be
helpful - we have learned to be
quiet - to be more truthful - to be
more honest - to try to be more
unselfish - to make the other fellows
troubles - our troubles - and by
following four steps we most of us
have a religious experience. The fellowship -
the unselfishness - appeals to us.
I wonder if we are off the track.
A very good merchandising
procedure is to find out why
people do not buy our
products - it is good reasoning
to find out WHY - I am fearfully
afraid that we are emphasizing
religious experience when actually
that is something that follows
as a result of 1-2-3-4.
In my mind the question is not particularly
the strength of the experience as
much as the improvement over
what we were. I would ask a
man to compare himself as follows
after say a month -
#1 - as compared to 2 months ago
do you have more of a feeling
that there is a power greater
than you?
#2 - Have you cleaned out more
completely with a human being
than ever before?
#3 - Have you less bad things
behind you than ever
before
#4 Have you been
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more honest with yourself & your
fellow man - Have you been
more thoughtful of people with
whom you are associated - Has
your life been cleaner both by
thought & action - Have you
looked at others less critically and
yourself more critically this past
30 days. You will never be
perfect but the question is
have you been more perfect?
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Alcoholism
May be best be defined to the
average person by pointing out
its leading symptoms and indicating
how these reactions differ from the
affects of alcohol on normal persons.
1. Total inability to control drinking
once drinking is started.
2. Antisocial behavior of these people
when intoxicated
A. Marked insanity
1. Little relation the - persons normal
behavior or ordinary
exuberant drinker or drunk
Publicity
Newspapers
When book is nearly ready to
leave the presses a short mat
article should be sent to the
12,285 newspapers in the U.S.
This article would briefly cover
the work as it has gone to date.
Case histories would be covered.
- It possibly would be a brief
case history of the work and
announcement of the book.
At least four news bulletins
should be published at weekly
intervals, ahead of the book.
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